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Moonpaw
Apr 23, 2008 14:04:20 GMT -5
Post by Silverpaw on Apr 23, 2008 14:04:20 GMT -5
Name:: Moonpaw
Age:: 6 moons
Rank:: Apprentice
Clan:: NightClan
Physical Description:: This graceful she-cat's pelt is almost as black ask the night sky. Her paws as gray as the moon and shine in the morning light. Her eyes are a light shade of gray. In the moons light, she appears to glow. She has one silver stripe that runs down her back. Her muzzle is speckled with white spots.
Personality:: She has an optimistic persona. But. she is lonely at times. She is also very hyper. She can act bossy at times. She cannot wait to be an apprentice. She loves playing around. Also, loves to play tricks on others.
History:: She had a rough past. A Moon after her birth, her mother died. Her father move to another clan soon after. She had a sister, too. They used to play all the time. But her sister went out into the forest. She never came back. She has only one sister left. She doesn't like talking about her past.
Role Play Example:: As Moonkit slowly opened her eyes, she saw Silverpelt fade away into the morning sun. She sat up and stretched her paws out, clawing at the ground. Sleepily walking outside, she yawned. She was hoping that she would be able to become an apprentice today. She gingerly sat down to watch the rest of Silverpelt fade. The sky sure looks pretty at dawn, she thought to herself.
Other:: She has a sister named Silverpaw
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Moonpaw
Apr 28, 2008 21:38:15 GMT -5
Post by Brackentail on Apr 28, 2008 21:38:15 GMT -5
You need one more full sentence on your personality. It'd be nice to have more detail on things, too, but as long as you meet the standards, you're okay.
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Moonpaw
Jun 2, 2008 16:52:29 GMT -5
Post by Silverpaw on Jun 2, 2008 16:52:29 GMT -5
is this good
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Moonpaw
Jun 29, 2008 3:24:46 GMT -5
Post by Brackentail on Jun 29, 2008 3:24:46 GMT -5
Yeah, that's better.
Accepted.
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