Celestialpaw

[Opalstar]

(I can't join because I'm not old enough)

Name: Celestialpaw
Age:8 moons
Rank: warrior
Clan:HailClan
Physical Description:Tabby with grey fur and dark stripes.Her fur is semi long and she has a bobtail.Celestialpaw's eyes are emerald green, and a stripe runs down her face that could be mistaken for a scar.
Personality: Intelligent and clever for her age.Usually serious and slightly impatient.More neutral thn good, but still loyal to her Clan.Doesn't like how she's a bad runner.
History:Born on a lunar eclipse, hence the name 'Celestial'paw.When a young apprentice she got whitecough because she saw Mysterymoon talking to a group of rogues.Mysterymoon saw her and pushed her into the cold stream.She got cold and got whitecough, and later tld on Mysterymoon and Mysterymoon got exiled.
Role Play Example:Before she knew it, she was in he freezing stream.Celestialpaw struggled,but then stopped and waited for her to touch the bottom (it was a slightly shallow stream (yay for alliteration!)).She felt her paws tough pebbles, and she pushed hard.She went up, and hastily grabbed the edge of the shore.
Pulling herself out, she walked to the medicine cat, shivering.
Other:
Parents:
Blowingfur (golden she-cat with green eyes),Palestorm (dark gray tom with amber eyes)
Siblings:
Beautystream (golden she-cat with amber eyes), Snapjaw (gray tabby tom with amber eyes)

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