Greengaze | Nightclan

[Greengaze]

Name;; Greengaze

Age;; 37 Moons

Rank;; Warrior

Clan;; Nightclan

Gender;; She-cat

Physical Description;; Greengaze has always looked pretty much the same - obviously except for her size. When she was born, she was quite a small kit. However, as time went on, she grew more rapidly than her clan mates. Eventually when Greengaze became a Warrior, she was generally the same size as everyone else.
Greengaze has very dark, black fur. Her pelt is thick and clean, covering a strong layer of skin. The she-cat isn’t big and bulk, but she’s not skinny either. She has quite a bit of invisible muscle underneath that fur. Greengaze cleans herself regularly, as she finds that she can’t fight well without a healthy-looking pelt. It’s just her little obsession.
Greengaze’s eyes are bright emerald, hence her name. Her mother, Jadegaze, was quite astonished when her kit first opened its eyes. Greengaze takes after her mother in appearance.
Overall, Greengaze has a slightly unusual appearance. Jet black fur, with bright green eyes.


Personality;; Being the loudest of her litter, Greengaze still holds the loud and bouncy personality that she held when a kit. She loves to be the center of attention, but doesn’t hog it. The Warrior is a fair and respectable cat. At times Greengaze can get annoying, and difficult to get through to. But her self-control compensates. She knows when it’s time to be serious and mature, and when it’s okay to be herself.
Greengaze can get distracted easily, whether it’s during training and she sees an interesting leaf falling, or something small and simple like that. Despite this habit, she does attempt to stay focused and on task. As well as being known as a bouncy, slightly childish Warrior, Greengaze holds the reputation as a cat who tries her very hardest at all times.


History;; Greengaze was born in a stressful situation. A Warrior of Nightclan, named Jadegaze, inconvenientely fell in love with a rogue. She would sneak out during the day, saying that she was going to hunt. Whilst out of camp, she would meet her lover. His name was Ace. But suspicions aroused within the clan when Jadegaze would constantly come back to camp emptypawed. Her best friend, Lionclaw, decided to talk to her. He discovered about her secret affair, and realised he needed to help out. Especially since Jadegaze had fallen pregnant. The two Warriors came up with a plan. they would tell the camp that Jadestar had never come back to camp with prey because of her pregnancy, and that Lionclaw was the father. Greengaze still to this day thinks that Lionclaw was her father. (Jadegaze and Lionclaw are deceased. Ace is not.)
Greengaze has never missed her mother, as she never met her. Rumors have made Greengaze suspicious that Lionclaw was infact not her father. She plans to find out someday.


Role Play Example;; Many detailed and pretty leaves were falling do the ground from the high treetops, but this wouldn't distract Greengaze. Not this time. She was determined to prove to herself that she could get through a whole hutning session alone without being caught off track.
Greengaze crouched down, her bellyfur brushing the cold earth lightly. She narrowed her eyes and attempted to focus entirely. She breathed a sigh of relief. Her senses had picked up immediately, and she was in the zone to hunt.
Greengaze crouched lower. She had heard, and seen, a bush rustle to her left. She slowly turned around, careful not to make any noise or feeling in the ground. There. She spotted the tail of a large mouse whip around the trunk of a tree.
Greengaze followed it speedily, but steadily. She didn't want to be thrown of balance and make a racket.
A loud snap echoed through the forest, and she was brought back to her senses.
The noise had come from behind the tree. Greengaze narrowed her bright eyes, and tredded around the tree, peeking before revealing her whole body. But there was no mouse in sight.
The Warrior frowned, and straightened up.
"You shouldn't be so quick to drop your guard," said a voice to her right. Greengaze spun around, and saw a large, black cat emerge from the underbush. He stank like crowfood, and his fur was matted with flow, dirt and Starclan only knows what else.
"what do you want?" Spat Greengaze, attempting a strong and harsh voice. The tom laughed. "Oh, I just wanted to catch up. I've been watching you for a while," he paused and waited for her to reply. When she didn't, he spoke again, "Shall we start over in a less creepy way?
Greengaze shrugged. "I guess."
"Let me introduce myself," the rogude voiced in a polite manner, "I'm Ace."

Other;; I plan to use the above RP Example further on, once I've gotten used to this site.

[Brackentail]

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